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I GOT BACK FROM SCHOOL AND I SAW...
a tree on the pavement at Sater Street; next to it was a bin. Because I’d been eating apples I opened the bin and threw the cores away. I saw something moving at the bottom. Without thinking I put my hand inside and felt a huge pincer grab it …
By boum32
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I GOT BACK FROM SCHOOL AND I SAW...

I was walking back from school on a sunny afternoon, thinking of all the good things I could do when I’m home. Few minutes later, I stand in the middle of my street staring at a thing that I could have never thought of… My ripped teddy on the floor.

By Squigly

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I GOT BACK FROM SCHOOL AND I SAW...



my mother yelling at me, she looked really angry. Oh no, mom must have found out about that fight! It happened this morning at recess. Does she know I already have a warning? Does she know that I might get expelled?


“Darling, you forgot your lunch-box. Weren’t you hungry?”


Phew!
By The Moonwalker

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I GOT BACK FROM SCHOOL AND I SAW...



this huge guy with one big fat eye in the middle of my garden. I thought that I was dreaming but actually I was wrong. My mum fainted because he was going to hit her with a club! I jumped on him and landed in his enormous shoe. Help me!
By Cookie.07
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I GOT BACK FROM SCHOOL AND I SAW...

I came back from school and saw my house on fire. My mum was on the roof and my dad on the balcony! I climbed to my tree house and said ,“Catch.” I threw my tape measure and I pulled mum down. Dad was too heavy. I piled all the books I could reach and saved him.

by asus
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I GOT BACK FROM SCHOOL AND I SAW...

A big mountain of sweets and lollipops.

But everybody ate everything.

I was so disappointed, but there was 1 extra lollipop in the teacher’s bag.

I think you know what I’m going to do…

I’m going to take it, but do you know how?

Got it!

Thanks for your help!

By LittleCat22

Comments

  1. This week I chose asus' mini saga as the best because of his very simple ending, I also found it funny because as it s weird to think someone climbed up a pile of books.
    by Squigly

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  2. Hi LittleCat22,
    Welcome to the ELF Blog. I hope you'll have fun on it and that you will write lots of interesting and fun mini-sagas like the one you just wrote.
    Bye
    Squigly

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  3. Welcome littlecat22! Look at my article Super Cats. I'm coco 2000

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