A STRESSFUL DENTIST'S CHECK UP - this week's mini sagas by our young writers

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Today I’m going to the dentist, but I hate it. When we get there, my mum says,
“Why are you scared of the dentist?” I just shrug. As we enter the dentist's office I’m petrified; and to my surprise when I come out, I’ve got a sweet in my mouth.

By Squigly
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The zoo dentist was stressed. He was looking at the crocodile’s pointy teeth and the croc was smiling hungrily. They went into the dentist’s room. The dentist said, ‘Where do I need to brush his teeth?’ The zoo keeper replied, ‘At the back’. He started to brush the teeth carefully…
By Lollipop

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I was in the dentist’s chair, Mum and the dentist were talking when I heard the fatal word “EXTRACTION”!
I ran to Mum. I begged her for anything except that. I put my hands together and started praying.
But actually, the dentist said that I DIDN’T need an extraction! Phew!
By The Moonwalker
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Normally, I love being a dentist, but today when I entered my office and saw a green witch, I screamed and ran out! But I came back in. She had a warty nose and especially POINTY, BLACK teeth! I checked them, and was astonished to find gold, behind a molar!

 Cookie.07
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I was about to take off for the moon CrcrCRcrcrCRCRcrcrcrCRCRCRcr the engines were screaming! I looked out of the window and saw a man in white, holding dental forceps running towards the rocket and shouting “STOP STOP”! He came up to me and said, “No more space travel for you!”

By asus
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On Monday at 5 pm I had my dentist appointment; my fourteen brothers had been terrifying me since I had known about it. I arrived on Monday, but the dentist was running an hour late – more stress! The hour passed… the dentist asked me to open my mouth. I fainted!
By boum32

Comments

  1. Anonymous5 December 2018 at 05:19

    I especially liked three of these: asus, cookie.07 and lollipop, but I chose lollipop's because I think it was really original. From The Moonwalker

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  2. Anonymous5 December 2018 at 06:35

    Boum 32, I was imagining 13 bedrooms for the 14 brothers! It would be hard to go upstairs to brush your teeth and then go down again to your bedroom. From Lollipop

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