Tom was running. His feet were hurting, but he knew he couldn't stop because a group of gorillas was chasing him. He spotted a giant hole in a tree and without hesitating he leaped in! He saw the group run past him. He was relieved. - Tom was 23 years old. He was an explorer and he was very brave because the dark jungle was the most dangerous place in the world! He was accused of the murder of the gorilla king but actually the murderer was the king’s servant Tomas. Suddenly he heard a banging noise behind him! He turned around and saw fist-shaped dents in the tree… He heard the gorilla voices. Luckily the tree was hollow so he climbed up and just as he had heaved himself up he saw a gorilla poke its head in, but it was too stupid to look up. Four long hours later Tom was sure they had gone. However he had made a terrible mistake. So he climbed out of the tree where the gorillas were waiting patiently for him. They grabbed him using their giant, muscled arms and ...
Hi, here's my mini saga:"I’m running in the jungle with three dinosaurs behind me. I suddenly have an idea; there’s a small bridge that wouldn’t support the dinosaurs weight. So I start running across the bridge and just as I reach the other side I hear “ROAR,” as they fall in the massive hole."
ReplyDeleteThis week, I thought the mini sagas beginings were all good; However I thought that Boom32 's was the best of all as it makes you want to read more about it.
By Squigly
I was on a hill walk and I heard heavy footsteps. I turned and saw a T-Rex!
ReplyDeleteI knew that I had to stay still. Suddenly I saw lots of different dinosaurs! I was very scared. I ran to grandpa’s and then I woke up in bed. What a dream.