New mini saga title for this week - A STRESSFUL DENTIST'S CHECK-UP

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The Moonwalker has chosen your title this week, too. Don't forget to write a great ending, as well as a really good beginning. And remember - only 50 words!

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  1. Anonymous30 November 2018 at 08:51

    Hi Here's my mini saga "Today I’m going to the dentist, but I hate it. When we get there, my mum says,
    “ Why are you scared of the dentist?” I just shrug. As we enter the office I’m petrified; and at my surprise when I come out, I’ve got a sweet in my mouth." By Squigly

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  2. Asus5 December 2018 at 03:03

    I was about to take off for the moon CrcrCRcrcrCRCRcrcrcrCRCRCRcr the engines were screaming! I looked out of the window and saw a man in white, holding dental forceps running towards the rocket and shouting “STOP STOP”! He came up to me and said, “No more space travel for you!”

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