Where did the biscuits go? This week's mini sagas presented by your favourite young writers.
Gangster cookie
This night the cookie
box has disappeared: the red ant who guards the cookie box was saying that she has
been attacked by the cookie gang, the most dangerous cookie gangstas. They love
cookies. If you see one, call Catie, cat policewoman! She stops all the cookie
gangs.
from coco 2000
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My dog looked at me with hopeful, pleading eyes. I was at the
table eating cookies. I needed to hurry, for tennis. I ate one cookie, left the
second and sprinted out. When I came back it wasn’t there. Django hadn’t moved
but I was 100% sure it was him!
By Cookie.07
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One windy morning the cookies were gone! “I thought it was Bear,”
I said. I went to see him. “Where did you put the cookies?”
He said, “I didn’t take the cookies!”
We went to see Fox. We said, “Where did you put the
cookies?”
“In my tummy!” she replied.
By Lollipop
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This morning I woke up and I asked my friend if he had seen my chocolate biscuits. He told me they were in the fridge, I went to it and I saw my biscuit bowl empty. After hours of investigation with my family, I realised that I had eaten them.
From Boum32
From Boum32
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This morning I woke up and went down stairs to have my breakfast and as every morning I opened the fridge to get my bowl of my favorite biscuits and to my surprise it is not there. I look around the house and I find my teddy eating my biscuits.
By Squigly
By Squigly
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Mummy left the dog on his own but she forgot to put the
biscuits away! She came back to see them
gone! It couldn’t have been the dog, they were still on the side with the lid
on. She saw crumbs on Melissa’s bed: it was Melissa! The nasty girl.
By asus
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I loved all your stories continue writing them! I especially liked coco2000's, but the winners of the best beginning are coco2000 and Cookie.07. Because coco2000 has never chosen the best beginning he can choose this time.
Maybe Melissa was just hungry...what do you think?
ReplyDeleteOne time a young lady tourist from Texas went to a café in Paris. She saw on the menu "café avec biscuit". So she ordered it. Boy was she surprised. On the coffee saucer was a stupid little hard speculos. She was waiting for a mouth-watering, fluffy, hot and fresh Southern biscuit that she could drip butter and honey on.
ReplyDeleteYou know like a scone...
If you don't know what a scone is, ask your teacher. She's a great cook. Her husband too. They make great soups and I hear they have humongous squash!!!